Looking for feedback

[Perineon]

Hi. I've recently started doing reviews again, but they'll mostly be about animated media. Here's my most recent one.
I know my voice is weird. I'm a girl that sounds like a boy and everyone that meets me online thinks I'm a boy which is ok I guess



And here's a slightly older one that I still somewhat like.

[Locklear]

I watched part of the MLP video. I can tell you know what you're talking about, but it comes across a bit dull and slow (I have the same issue). If you work on using your voice in a more exciting way, it would help the watchability. So talking with more purpose and oomph, think radio announcer. Also, talking faster would help as well with pacing. The show footage itself seemed a bit borked. If you have it at 720p and that's why it's not fullscreen, I would probably just upscale it and lose the background. Makes for a better watching experience. The top edge of the footage seemed shaky and jittery. Not sure what caused that but I would fix that if you can because it's very distracting. I know nothing about MLP, so I can't give you content feedback. Like I said though, it sounds like you know what you're talking about and your humor ain't bad either, just need to work on the delivery.

[Perineon]

Hi. Thanks for the feedback man. :3

Yeah, my voice is pretty monotone. I try to get some emotion in there but it doesn't always show. I'm working on it. My main issue is confidence, and I'm getting help for that. Hopefully I can improve over time. I'll try to talk faster, too.

I'm not sure what causes the shakyness and jitteryness. I've had that issue for a while. Part of me thinks it's my Laptop and the fact that it struggles to render things. I've rendered a video with the exact same settings and the same program (A more recent version though) on a computer at college, and it turned out fine. I'll see what happens when I get a better PC, if I can't find a fix for the issue before then. I'll try messing around with the render settings again.

Again, thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it. x3

[Locklear]

Apr 17, 2016 20:25:48 GMT Perineon said:

Hi. Thanks for the feedback man. :3

Yeah, my voice is pretty monotone. I try to get some emotion in there but it doesn't always show. I'm working on it. My main issue is confidence, and I'm getting help for that. Hopefully I can improve over time. I'll try to talk faster, too.

I'm not sure what causes the shakyness and jitteryness. I've had that issue for a while. Part of me thinks it's my Laptop and the fact that it struggles to render things. I've rendered a video with the exact same settings and the same program (A more recent version though) on a computer at college, and it turned out fine. I'll see what happens when I get a better PC, if I can't find a fix for the issue before then. I'll try messing around with the render settings again.

Again, thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it. x3

No problem. I have the voice issue as well, so I know the struggle

[legengary]

Ill just Piggy back off of what Lock said. You've got some good potential, just needs a few tweeks here or there. Really did enjoy the video though and hope to see more form ya in the future.

[Content Free Time]

I thought your voice was alright, I just think you need a little better mic. Your current one seems to muffle your voice a bit. Also I think playing the entire Gravity Falls into in that video was a bit much, for a four minute video I think you would have been better off just using a little segment of the intro. Other than that, not bad! It's cool to see stuff besides video games for a change.

[cbgog]

I think you've got a good basis going here.
Other than that I agree with Content Free time on the Mic, and Lock on your voice.
Keep it up!