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Post by SuperPawsitive on Apr 6, 2016 4:48:22 GMT
Just as the title states! Criticize my stuff! Specifically, my video, which will be linked below  I made the series so I could have regular content in a sense. As the title states. It is a short video (Typically a little over a minute) where I go out and try to sell you a game (rather than review it) I am pretty proud of it  |
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cbgog
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Post by cbgog on Apr 6, 2016 13:58:46 GMT
I think it was a pretty neat idea for a series.
While I didn't garner any laughs, I can say that I still enjoyed watching it.
The idea of salesmen pitching a game is cool to me, but I think you could perhaps make him emphasize things more?
I think that might sell the comedy. (Pun? Anyone?)
Keep it up, and I'll be sure to check out your channel soon when I get the time.
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Post by SuperPawsitive on Apr 6, 2016 14:59:34 GMT
I think it was a pretty neat idea for a series. While I didn't garner any laughs, I can say that I still enjoyed watching it. The idea of salesmen pitching a game is cool to me, but I think you could perhaps make him emphasize things more? I think that might sell the comedy. (Pun? Anyone?) Keep it up, and I'll be sure to check out your channel soon when I get the time. Working on my humor is something I need to continue working on. I'm very punny. I can't wait to make more installments in the series. Just cause it's short and simple to make! Thanks for the feedback. I'll see what I can do! |
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Post by digitaljoe on Apr 7, 2016 1:00:48 GMT
This was great quality. I loved the idea and style of the video. The overlayed effect to make the video look old was a bit distracting, and the voice was a bit grating to my ears. Those are really just stylistic things that would be a person to person thing. I did enjoy it though! Keep up the good work!
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Post by SuperPawsitive on Apr 7, 2016 1:06:59 GMT
This was great quality. I loved the idea and style of the video. The overlayed effect to make the video look old was a bit distracting, and the voice was a bit grating to my ears. Those are really just stylistic things that would be a person to person thing. I did enjoy it though! Keep up the good work! The voice used to be a lot worse. Believe it or not, that's the least annoying version of that voice that I have made as of yet! |
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Post by MoonSpirit on Apr 12, 2016 7:41:13 GMT
Great video, definitely a great way to get people into the current games. Now for my critique:
The VHS style is neat, but it just doesn't fit with the old timey music as I think it should be with more sepia like filter, but that would be too distracting.
The salesman voice was a little pitchy for me, but I do love the energy you put in.
The intro kind of took a while to get things rolling for a video advertised as a minute sales pitch. Maybe be like this:
1. Intro splash
2. Ask about interest game for a few seconds, then opening catch phrase.
That's how I feel. Otherwise, great production.
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Post by Octopus Joey on Apr 15, 2016 18:21:46 GMT
Interesting format. I'm glad you kept it pretty consistent. Good job!
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Post by Locklear on Apr 16, 2016 14:22:46 GMT
I agree with the shortened intro idea. I like the concept for this video series, but I think the execution needs work. The voice isn't QUITE right, but it's getting there. Also your summaries are going to have to be ON POINT because of how little time you have to explain the games. Doin good so far though!
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legengary
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Post by legengary on Apr 18, 2016 2:24:34 GMT
I agree about the whole voice thing, but other than that I would say things are pretty solid. Keep up the good work man
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