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Post by digitaljoe on Apr 2, 2016 0:56:48 GMT
Hey guys! I'm doing something a bit different for this next video. The style will be a little different, but I like exploring and doing whatever I think would be fun. Now, because the style is different I would really appreciate it if you guys could give my script a good rundown and let me know what you think. My worry is that the ending will be too creepy. But you guys tell me what could be changed. I'm very malleable. Link: pastebin.com/Yvn6fsa0Also to keep this category from being cluttered, I'm gonna delete my previous advertisement threads. EDIT: I don't know how to delete threads I've made. I might not be able to, or maybe I'm just missing something... |
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Post by TheGameStatistic on Apr 2, 2016 23:45:54 GMT
This can go one of two ways. hilarious because of delivery and timing. or extreme cringe and creepiness. there is no in between.
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Post by CraftyMattGaming on Apr 3, 2016 2:23:35 GMT
I whole heartedly agree with game statistic. Delivery will make or break this script
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Post by digitaljoe on Apr 3, 2016 14:52:11 GMT
I'll make sure to do this justice. In my head I know what I want it to look like, it'll just be difficult to make it fine.
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Post by Content Free Time on Apr 3, 2016 21:18:21 GMT
Hanako is best girl
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Post by digitaljoe on Apr 4, 2016 0:24:15 GMT
Funny enough, I actually prefer Lilly. I feel like the joke works better with a more Japanese name though. |
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Post by CraftyMattGaming on Apr 4, 2016 0:35:14 GMT
I dunno about you guys but i like my chicks with Drillz for days!
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Post by Tentacle on Apr 4, 2016 4:24:33 GMT
Topic matter is overdone, especially in a comedic style. You'll just be called unoriginal with this project.
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Post by Content Free Time on Apr 4, 2016 4:35:16 GMT
Topic matter is overdone, especially in a comedic style. You'll just be called unoriginal with this project. I disagree, I haven't seen that many videos on Katawa Shoujo compared to some other games. |
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Post by TheGameStatistic on Apr 4, 2016 5:43:29 GMT
Also who cares. If it's something he want to talk about, then that's good enough.
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Post by Locklear on Apr 6, 2016 2:38:29 GMT
This sounds hilarious DO IT
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Post by 8 Bit Brody on Apr 14, 2016 21:38:59 GMT
Look at the Undertale video I made. Expect those types of comments left on the video. Make it any way. It's funny.
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