My new video over a Spawn game.

[jimnobodie]

Hey, all! Jim Nobodie here, and I've been lurking these boards for awhile now. I just uploaded my newest video and would appreciate any feedback you could give me on it. Please tell me what you liked/disliked, it helps me get better in the long run! This particular video is from my series called "The Adventures of Jim Nobodie," which is a "comedy" review show where I yell about how much something sucks. I do use curse words a fair bit (at least in this series) so if you're put off by that, don't watch my stuff. I don't mind, and completely understand.  

Most of my videos are over video games, but I'll be expanding what I talk about very soon. Thanks so much for watching! I look forward to what you have to say!



The channel itself --->
 
My "Let's Play" channel --->

[Content Free Time]

A ton of common tropes in the beginning of your video (like having a hard time putting the game in the console). Some of the over-exaggerations were a bit too much for me. Also I think three and a half minutes in was a little late to start talking about the game. After that it got good though.