First three videos from my channel.

[hawkeyeperson]

Hello everybody here are my first three videos I have uploaded onto my Youtube channel. Any sort of feedback would be great! I have noticed many things I plan of working on. I've noticed that Battleship and Incredible Hulk are both very long especially for the topic, so I've tried solving that In Burn Cycle. The Intro/lead up for Battleship Is also I feel very long, so I've tried to cut it down In Hulk. The last thing is the Audio and video editing really need some work but since I just been started editing I think I will definitely improve. Anyway here are the Videos let me know what I should be improving on, I appreciate it!

[Content Free Time]

Watched just your Burn Cycle video for now. Not bad, though I feel like the parts where you were commentating about the game weren't as strong as the parts where you were actually explaining it. Pretty good overall though!

[hawkeyeperson]

May 15, 2016 6:43:35 GMT Content Free Time said:

Watched just your Burn Cycle video for now. Not bad, though I feel like the parts where you were commentating about the game weren't as strong as the parts where you were actually explaining it. Pretty good overall though!

Thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it! I'll definitely try and work on improving how I commentate during the video.