Moon Spirit (formerly The Moon Spirit Experience)

[MoonSpirit]

Good evening everyone (even if it may not be evening by the time you read this), my name is Jonathan Lu but call me Moon Spirit.



I review video games, just like everyone else, after being inspired by fellow YouTubers and other content creators. I may not have any experience with video editing, PhotoShop, or whatever, but that ain't going to stop me from talking about video games. I also do Top 10's (only done 1 thus far) and that's all I can say about my channel.



As of right now, I'm doing a huge channel rebranding to find my mojo and get the wheels turning. Stay tuned til' I find more show ideas, but for now, here's a look at my most recent video:



Is this game another welcome addition to the Ratchet & Clank franchise? Well, I'll sum up my thoughts in 3 minutes, more or less.

[Content Free Time]

There are a couple common tropes in your video, during the intro in particular ("With all that said," -rhetorical question-). The rest of it was good though. I liked the length, a lot of reviewers tend to ramble on, haha.

[MoonSpirit]

Sorry about the intro trope. Then again, who can be original anymore?

[Content Free Time]

Haha, very true point

[Locklear]

Hey Moon! I think the problem with the overused statements is that 1.Everyone uses them too often, and 2.You used it at least twice in your video. Maybe just take a look at your scripts and see if you've repeated any phrases. Try and say things in different ways to spice things up. It comes across as a bit unnatural otherwise. I did appreciate the short length! Especially for a game that's essentially a rehash. Also, it's probably a bad idea to point out anything that could be seen as a mistake. TBH, I see a lot of youtubers audio setups and it's not a big deal. I'd rather hear you well than not see it.

[MoonSpirit]

Better late than never, so let me sum up Uncharted 4: A Thief's End in 3 minutes, more or less.

[Content Free Time]

Not bad, though I feel like I've seen more or less the same review of this game in like five different places now, lol.

[MoonSpirit]

Well, where else can we find original reviews nowadays?

[MoonSpirit]

Back to work, and I revisit a reboot to a beloved franchise.