Critical Thinking Show

[YoshyRyuDCC]

Hey guys, I got a channel about gaming news as well as the gaming community. I've been performing magic tricks at a couple of gaming conventions for awhile, but I felt I should start creating online content as well.
Feedback is welcome, as well as suggestions for the game reviews/other types of videos you think we might be able to tackle.

[Content Free Time]

I watched your Sonic GBA video. It was a little hard to hear you over the music. Also it just sort of felt like the entire video was just you swearing at the game? I see where you were coming from, and I'm sure most of it was done for comedic purposes, but I still think the video could have been a little more thought out. The editing was good though. Looking forward to seeing your channel grow!

[Locklear]

Hey Yoshy! So I checked out your news videos and reviews.

For the news videos: I enjoy the production values you've got going on! Got the desk and graphics and everything. It looks like such a professional production. My biggest problem is with the delivery. Most of it falls kinda flat, while also feeling a bit slow. So the impression I came away with was dull people reading scripts that were part informative, part filler, part funny, and part trying to be funny. Also, I'm okay with swearing because free speech and all that. I swear all the time at home. But WOW you guys don't stop and it's a bit distracting. Maybe tone it down a bit? I know you guys are probably writing scripts like how you would talk to make it more authentic, but honestly it feels like a crutch you're relying on to fill time. There are also weird cuts to the co-host who isn't talking at the time reacting to the other that don't really make sense. Like I said, everything looks so professional, but my problem is that is FEELS so UNprofessional. Like a hollow shell. A cognitive dissonance between your content and your presentation. Maybe if you changed your presentation to be less produced and more natural, similar to how Red Letter Media does it (different content I know but look at the style).

For the reviews: I only watched the SFV review. You had some good thoughts and I enjoyed those. I didn't really like how a third of the video seemed like a reaction video, and the end just turned into a stream commentary. I'd say it could use some more focus in general. Tell me about the game and why you like/dislike things. I want to hear what you have to say about it. That's what youtube reviews are all about, right?

Anyways, I know that was a mouthful and almost entirely negative feedback, but that's just MY opinion and I mean well. I hope any of this is helpful to you man.